The Official Writing Challenge
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Writing on the subject, Ow!, is not so easy; and you have done so well sharing so many messages on the ows of life. I love your theme.....spiritual.
01/18/10
Lots of applications for "ow" in this essay!

I wonder if it perhaps lacks focus--maybe just smoother transitions between paragraphs would do the trick.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Well done, and thank you very much.
01/24/10
You've covered a lot of ow situations here. I agree with you when we trust in Jesus we can overcome. Keep writing.

By the way, thank you for your lovely comments on my story, Teapot's First Lesson. You blessed me.