The Official Writing Challenge
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That was funny. I think we all have our pride cometh before fall stories.
Ow! indeed. The verses that were chosen are ever so true.
Thank you for such an enjoyable story. Humility is a lesson some never learn, but all thanks to God for His Holy living word.
HeHe! Great story and lesson on humility! My favorite part is where you talked about "bouncing the computer out the window instead of the interface." I think we all want to do that to our computers at times! Thanks for sharing. :)
Entertaining and amusing!

If you ever expand this, consider adding dialog to your narrative, for a more story-like feel.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Loved the kicker--lots of fun to read.