The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
That was funny. I think we all have our pride cometh before fall stories.
01/15/10
Ow! indeed. The verses that were chosen are ever so true.
Thank you for such an enjoyable story. Humility is a lesson some never learn, but all thanks to God for His Holy living word.
01/17/10
HeHe! Great story and lesson on humility! My favorite part is where you talked about "bouncing the computer out the window instead of the interface." I think we all want to do that to our computers at times! Thanks for sharing. :)
01/18/10
Entertaining and amusing!

If you ever expand this, consider adding dialog to your narrative, for a more story-like feel.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Loved the kicker--lots of fun to read.