The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for the different level of ows in our lives. I could truly relate to your story.
01/18/10
Oh, I've been there--all three of those levels!

I was thinking that you'd end with a life application of some sort. And for your readers' sake, an extra space between paragraphs would be great.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

Keep writing--this is good!

01/19/10
I agree with you. It helps to vioce the pain. The other day I stubbed my toe and tried so hard to be quiet and just bear the pain. It hurt until I said "ouch!".