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A beautiful poem that expresses the delight of color. I enjoyed your vivid descriptions of the different seasons and regions of Earth
12/15/09
Wonderful!! I could "see" exactly what you described. Isn't it so awesome to see something so beautiful in nature that you know in your heart only God could have created it
Thank you so much. This is a poignant description of God's glorious creation. I can only imagine the beauty of heaven but it must be magnificent if this is how the earth is arrayed. God bless and Merry Christmas.
12/15/09
Wow! Very nice work on this poem and your message is icing on the cake. Great rhyme and meter! You have a lot of talent!
01/15/10
This is fantastic! I love your vivid phrasing! I especially love these...
"autumn's flowing gown"....

"sunlight piercing through the leaves"....

and really love this one:

"Even when the shutter's drawn and eyelids flutter closed"...

Great, great job!!