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12/10/09
A beautiful poem that expresses the delight of color. I enjoyed your vivid descriptions of the different seasons and regions of Earth
12/15/09
Wonderful!! I could "see" exactly what you described. Isn't it so awesome to see something so beautiful in nature that you know in your heart only God could have created it
12/15/09
Thank you so much. This is a poignant description of God's glorious creation. I can only imagine the beauty of heaven but it must be magnificent if this is how the earth is arrayed. God bless and Merry Christmas.
12/15/09
Wow! Very nice work on this poem and your message is icing on the cake. Great rhyme and meter! You have a lot of talent!
01/15/10
This is fantastic! I love your vivid phrasing! I especially love these...
"autumn's flowing gown"....

"sunlight piercing through the leaves"....

and really love this one:

"Even when the shutter's drawn and eyelids flutter closed"...

Great, great job!!