The Official Writing Challenge
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I think your last line reads a little strangley, but I get the message. You've created a nice setting for a story to take place once they leave the boat. Great desciptions and good writing.
12/13/09
Thank you for the story of Noah and how the beauty of a new earth made him feel. I can only imagine his joy, and seeing the rainbow Whoa how it must have made his heart sing. God bless and have a Merry Christmas.