The Official Writing Challenge
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This was well-written. I'd have liked to have read more about the man's internal struggle, in addition to the descriptions of his behavior.
This is a good story! I love the second sentece: It was older now; the layer of dust tattling on its idleness

Great work!
Ronald, I just wanted to stop by and let you know that although your entry didn't actually place in the Challenge, it did make it into what was a relatively small list of semi-finalists. This really deserves a pat on the back, considering that this was the largest week for entries we've ever had. Well done and I hope you'll keep rising to the Challenge. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I liked the words "The hopeful trailblazer woke up to reality and found himself just a sojourner"; loved this take on the Biblical Prodical Son! My attention span is usually limited, but THIS piece kept me rivited to the end. Great story. Great job... and Very Well Written! Thanks for sharing.
Is THIS the one you thanked me for? No Title on Msg. I'm at a loss.