The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
A good summary of God's creation seen from the angle of a colorful world. I like the part you wrote about the exquisite landscape of Godís creation that reveals the hand of God in nature. I also like the ending that explores the reasons why men are not created the same, yet in His likeness we have been created, therefore, no one should feel superior to the other.

Just a suggestion on how you can make this story come to life -- write to 'show' rather than just 'tell' the story. Keep up the good work and keep on writing!

Thank you for this wonderful story of creation. God is a multitude of colors and if you can't see that then look at all the colorful things in creation. God bless.