The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/05
Lots of good metaphors here.
08/26/05
This is a good article with lots of different illustrations, comparing them with the material against the spiritual. Would suggest expounding this into a longer piece to make it an insightful read. Great job!
08/27/05
Good ideas. I liked the first paragraph but got lost in the transition to paragraph 2. I'd like each idea to be given a little more time and explanation.