The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for sharing such a touching story. The memory of all those children shall always hold special memories and the tribute to Bryan sad but one of God's saints.
12/09/09
A very tender story. The only critique would be, although you are very a descriptive writer, some of the description did not make sense to what you were applying it too. Watch that and the flow of your story, other than that nice writing.
I remember the TV and newspaper coverage when this occured, and that many were praying for your group as the story unfolded. You have given great insight into this tragedy. Thank you for sharing.