The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
I loved this story. You did a good of job of making the characters realistic. Nicely done!!
Loved this story. Isn't strange how the desires of our hearts sometimes back fires? Thank you. Keep writing.
12/09/09
A cute story, needs a little work here and there. In the first sentence, there is no need to capitalize fall. Keep practicing.