The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/09
Oh boy--this one flummoxed me, but the descriptions were colorful. (:
12/02/09
hmmm....May be the formatting but this is confusing to me. More like a stream of consciousness without continuity to make a story. It is very colorful and brought a smile to me in a couple of places. Keep writing!
Extremely colorful descriptions but the story was a bit confusing. Thanks for sharing.