The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/09
This is a sweet story. I love the spirit of giving, not only in the boy, but in the entire community. The only confusing thing was your point of view shifts, from Gary to his mother to a universal. Murry Christmas!
12/02/09
Agree with previous statement about POV shifts. I too like the portrayal of a giving spirit and being thankful for blessings received. Keep writing.
Thank you for sharing this tender story. God is so good and He never leaves nor forsakes us. Sharing is what God's love is all about.