The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/09
Very cute especially the comment about Dr. Seuss...:) Write On!
12/02/09
Cute story....missed a word here or there and repeated the use of a cliche..."but that's a horse of a different color." Keep writing!
12/03/09
I loved the way you used the saying of horse of a different color because nothing rhymes with orange. Good use of words. Keep writing.