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11/28/09
Love the child point of view here. Well done!
11/30/09
A nice Easter story seen from the eyes of a child! You've expressed the eagerness and anticipation very well and have successfully captured the mood in your story. Well done!
Truly a beautiful tender story as seen through the eyes of a child. I could just about imagine the peace and serenity of such a place. Thank you for sharing. God bless.