The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Talk about show and not tell, you did a great job of showing sunshine and unselfish love in your story. Beautiful.
11/19/09
What a touching way to illustrate how God perfects his strength in our weakness. You have captured the mood and the energy of the scene in schools for children wit special needs. Excellent.
Very, very touching. Needs a tissue alert.

One little thing...it's "principal".

This flowed nicely. You did a great job. Five stars from me.

11/22/09
Pass the tissues please!

This was beautiful. Emma's sweet spirit touched my heart. Well done!
What a beautiful story. Children with special needs have a way of teaching important lessons to normal people. Thank you.
11/24/09
Darling story. So well told.
11/25/09
Beautiful! My tears continue to flow. Kudos to all the Emmas in this world.
11/25/09
Love the heart of this story. Certainly needs telling and re-telling.
Thanks.
Mona
Precious story. I had read it before, and thought I had already left a message, but I had not. I work with special need kids and adults and I know how big their hearts can be,
Congrats on you win!