The Official Writing Challenge
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You had my attention from the beginning and the ending was such a surprise. Great Work!
What a gripping story. Once I started reading I had to finish. You held my attention from beginning to end. Thank God my kleenex's set next to my computer. Loved the ending. Thank you and keep writing.
Hooked me at the start too. Your portrayed seeking forgiveness, condemnation, hope, love, and faith so well, I wanted the story to continue. Very touching close. Good job and thank you for sharing.
Started strong and the middle was strong but the end petered out. Might have been word count, but needs a better transition in the ending. Keep writing and practicing.