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11/19/09
Lovely story reminding me of my childhood on a family farm. Thanks for sharing.
I loved this immensely. I grew up with cows, chickens, pigs and city slickers do not know that cows, pigs and horses may not take to strangers. I love country living and miss having all those critters around. I married and moved to the BIG city. Thanks for sharing.
11/24/09
Loved everything except the abrupt end. Needed one more paragraph, maybe something telling about Beatrice conversion to the now sweet cow.