The Official Writing Challenge
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Touching story reminding us it is never to late for He is always there, waiting.
This is a well told story - I struggle a little bit with him disappearing for that period of time without explanation, but all turned out well in the end. Good message.
I'm glad my box of kleenex is next to my computer. This was a very touching story. Sometimes things in life such as cancer can turn a non believer into a believer. God is good.
I agree with the commenter, there is still no explanation of why the 24hr disappearance act. That part needs work, it was almost 2 different stores. Stay on point and your article will work better.