The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your article,it would be a great devotional. I love the story about the mansion in heaven. Good job.
I agree 100%. Jesus is our reward and what a reward he is. Heaven is beyond of imagination and being their is the desire in every believers heart. Thank you.
11/24/09
Good title and content. Execution however, was not good. Many errors and no consistency in lines. I took the story about the mansions in heaven as a joke, because there is no place in scripture that saids I can do anything to earn a mansion, I have a mansion because God saids I do. Practice, practice, and you will get better.
11/24/09
I enjoyed your story but tend to agree the flow was a bit awkward. Keep writing!