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11/19/09
A beautiful contrast between intense - and temporary -infatuation, and the love of Jesus that will last forever. Well done
11/19/09
The beginning is funny and its strange how some childhood moments can stay with us forever. You made this believable.
Thank you for such a gripping story. Things that happen in childhood can leave scars and fears but Christ overcame the world and reclaimed the keys from our tormentor.
11/24/09
I enjoyed the opening and agree children can be cruel; it can be hard to get beyond it. You did a great job of turning that to a story of devotion, and forgiveness. Thanks for sharing.