The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Very nice, but please leave spaces between paragraphs and when different characters are speaking. I'm sure you want to know this because that's why you signed up in Faithwriters, for helpful critique. Try reading some articles in advance or masters and see how it's done. Spacing makes for an easier read. Thank you.
Very cute and I agree. Spaces between paragraphs is great but all in all this was enjoyable. Thank you.