The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Very sweet and I love all your descriptions. I really sensed the nice rural feel you created and I love the ending. When posting your story make some paragraph breaks for the eyes of your reader :) Loved it.
I enjoyed your story of the Smokey Mountains. They are truly beautiful but I loved the last part of your story the most. No man can create the purple color like God.
You have given a delightful flavor to the Smokeys and the people that live there. Paragraph breaks (white space) would help the reader stay focused. Good job.