The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Very nice...I love Bible stories expounded on...you did a very nice job especially for the word purple. Thanks for sharing.
11/12/09
Very good, there was one sentence about Paul and Barnabas going their separate ways that was hard to follow. Needs to be worded a little differently. Also I am not sure there is any bases to think Paul was poor before his conversion. Overall though I really enjoyed the tale. I had forgotten about Lydia, the seller of purple.
I wonder what it would be like to be introduced as someone who 'fears God,' or such other Godly trait?
11/19/09
Well-researched Bill, and congratulations on your second placing. God bless you as your writing ministry grows.