The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice...I love Bible stories expounded did a very nice job especially for the word purple. Thanks for sharing.
Very good, there was one sentence about Paul and Barnabas going their separate ways that was hard to follow. Needs to be worded a little differently. Also I am not sure there is any bases to think Paul was poor before his conversion. Overall though I really enjoyed the tale. I had forgotten about Lydia, the seller of purple.
I wonder what it would be like to be introduced as someone who 'fears God,' or such other Godly trait?
Well-researched Bill, and congratulations on your second placing. God bless you as your writing ministry grows.