The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/05
I enjoyed reading this story.
08/25/05
Some excellent ideas and description. I liked the idea of God giving us His blessings to boast of. And the double meaning of the snake at the end.
08/25/05
Thanks for the wonderful reminder! Great read! And a smile at the end...
08/26/05
A good example of a piece written with authentic voice. It will be more effective and readable if you put a space between each paragraph.