The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/09
I remember those candy cigarettes on a cold day. Good comparisons and a clear message, well done.
11/06/09
I enjoyed your reflections. You wrote well.
Candy cigarettes bought back so many memories. I loved your story. God has ways of changing us. Thank you.
01/17/10
Excellent view of boyhood. But leave it to me to point out a something that needs fixing, (in my opinion only). The first paragraph is kinda, sorta, too long...needs to be cut down into smaller ones. From the picture I get from this story of your childhood - I KNOW now why you became a Marine! (*.*) !