The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
"Very light and refreshing entry" A smile in every word!
08/25/05
Humorous story. (Sounds like our family!)
08/26/05
I would have liked some dialog from the college students, and the reference to the 400-pound passenger might be eliminated. Written in a witty and authentic voice.