The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/09
This one has definite potential. Is "transitional fight or transitional flight"? Flight would make more sense. A little reworking the words that you have and this can shine.
Having known so many who have died from cancer, this gives comfort. I always wondering what is going on in their minds in those last moments. Thanks for sharing this.
This touched my heart so deeply. I have lost so many to cancer. Watching a loved one go through such agony is painful. Thank you for an inside glance of their mind. I enjoyed this.