The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/09
Lovely!
11/07/09
"It is a comfy blanket of purest white
It lays over her, covering
Over her, such glorious newness" this has no meter in your poem. There are parts that are very good and others that are quite bumpy. But the good part were quite good.
Thank you for sharing. I never thought about a blanket of white but that is what Jesus does. Covered with His pure sweet blood which washes us white as snow.