The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
"Beautiful" What a talented poet you are! I enjoyed every word!
An excellent poem and testimony to God's work in your life. Well done.
08/23/05
Oh Yes! By His grace! You are a very gifted poet. Blessings, Rita
Wow! You got a winning poem here. I like the way you focused on God using this week's unique theme, Luggage. Yes, indeed, He carried no case, but He carried the sins of the world including mine. By the grace of God, we are here to share His glory. Thank you for sharing the gift that He gave you. I God bless!
08/24/05
I had tears in my eyes reading this one! You have a neat way with words. A beautiful reminder.
08/25/05
Very powerful indeed. I liked the repetition of "without a case." It was a beautiful reminder that He was the case that carried them all.
08/26/05
Very effective use of repitition, with the change in the last stanza.
An incredible and beautiful poem. Congrats on placing in the winner's circle - it was well-deserved.