The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
I loved this. Oh what an excellent novel it would make.
Keep it up!
10/30/09
I enjoyed this interesting story and thought you put the topic to good use throughout. Keep writing.
10/30/09
I loved the way you weaved the past into the present. Good story!
10/30/09
Well done. Well constructed and lovely story as well.
11/02/09
Enjoyed the way you weaved the family history together. Nice job!
11/02/09
Lovely Story with an historical flavour. Enjoyed. Colin
11/03/09
i agree. this has all the potential of being a novel. nicely done.
11/04/09
Oh, this was so good...I love how you twisted in such a short story that is hard to do...really good.