The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely story. It was well written and your fascination with the suitcase led me to wonder also. Good work and thanks for the read.
There seems to be a theme between luggage and missions, which I very much enjoy, as I believe they are among the best entries. I'm glad to say this one does not disappoint. Well done.
08/25/05
Very nice story.
08/25/05
Very nicely done. The only thing I wasn't clear on was: where did the narrator find this suitcase?
08/25/05
Lovely story! I am guessing from the suntanned cheeks that she found the suitcase washed up on the beach. The missionary perished when a ship was sunk? See? You have my imagination going! Nice job.
Well done but I wanted more!!! I feel as if you've just given me a taste. Now I'll have to dream up more letters to fill the case. A creative approach to the topic. Thanks for sharing.
This was great, Tisha! I love how you draw us into the imagining of what the suitcase is from. It was a little distracting to have to wonder where the suitcase was and how the MC found it. Great job!