The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05
Fantastic entry! A touch of humor and the message rang out loud and clear! Blessings, RIta
Meaty message with a light and witty wrapper. See it is rubbing off...this was a good deal of fun.
08/26/05
You gave your narrator a fun, rustic voice. Watch out for putting unnecessary spaces in words with apostrophes.