The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Very clever! What ever works at the dentist office right?
Well done.
10/30/09
I like the light, easy way you write. I'm also a fan of any one who can laugh at themselves. Good job.
11/02/09
interesting story. brought several differnt directions into one when it looked eraly on it wouldn't work. very good.
11/03/09
Both the climbing of the mounatains and the climbing of the dentist's chair are moments of emotional adventure, risky adventure. Only those who can hear the inner entertainment of hope and reality actually go through without regret.

I enjoyed the story.