The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Lots of good instructions throughout this piece. If you haven't led a Bible study yet, prayerfully consider it. I think you have what it takes.
10/29/09
What a good intro to a devotional piece. I hope it will go in a book you should write!Very good.
This is really great! Sorry for color-blind Dad--I'm sure he never thought his misjudgement in sandwich making would end up in a nice writing piece.
10/29/09
Written with humor and great insight! Such true words of wisdom you offer us.
Your closing line was perfect! Good job.
10/30/09
Loved the analogy and the instruction it gave. Good job!
11/02/09
good story. nice tie-in, too.
YAY! Congratulations on your highly commended, Lisa! Way to GOOOOOOOOOO!
11/05/09
Congrats Lisa! "Relish" the moment!
11/12/09
Actually, I guess I'm the strange one...I LOVE peanut butter and sweet pickle sandwiches, so pickle relish would be fine with me!! Great story with great writing! All 'round good job!