The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
You said so much in so few words. Lots of strong imagery in your choice of phrases--especially in the opening paragraph. Good work.
10/29/09
Death to bring life- What a concept. Very well done.
Very well written.
10/30/09
This is a strong piece that moved me. I wonder if you could try putting it into poetry form.
11/01/09
i like the poetry idea. this had that kind of feel. but i really enjoyed it in this style. you created some very powerful images.
11/02/09
What a lovely piece. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Colin
11/02/09
I have to echo the comments above, and add my thanks for sharing this. Very well-written, very moving. Imagery was so good, I held my breath waiting for the resurrection.
~Kate
11/04/09
Quite lovely--I can see this as a narration over a powerpoint with beautiful and stark images.