The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
I really liked this. Great descriptions.Beautiful thoughts, Hope you do poetry often,you did this very well.
"Neigh" should be spelled "nigh." Cute poem.
11/01/09
roflol!!!! been there done that. well said. well said indeed.
Oh totally enjoyed reading this poem. Such a fun poem to read.
11/05/09
very cute. I can relate, good job.
11/05/09
Congratulations on placing first with this fun and entertaining poem. So much truth in those lines. Flow and rhyme were excellent as well as the message tucked in this entry.
11/12/09
Very cute!