The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Sweet Story. Keep it up.
I enjoyed the positive ending. Nice story.
10/31/09
great job developing the tension in the MC. i thought the ending was a bit abrupt after the buildup, but I suspect that was due to word constraints. wonderful story of how things can change if we reach past our fears. keep it up!