The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Good thoughts. Would like to hear more.
This would make a good devotion with a little more information. Keep writing.
10/30/09
I also felt I was reading a devotional, which is good. I like the way you wrapped this up as you give the reader food for thought.
10/31/09
lots of directions this could go. very thought provoking. good imagery.