The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/09
Good points. Well written.Great summation at the end.
Greed and money go together as you said. Well done.
10/30/09
This read like a sermon, and I share your concerns. . . and we pray.
10/31/09
the sentences tend to be quite long. but other than that, well written. nice link between "greed" and "green" to introduce the topic. good structure, well written...and timely, as well. good job.