The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05

“Carry the luggage of goodness in your heart and let your life be free of burden.” SO true! Blessings, Rita
08/24/05
A very thought-provoking piece and one we need to be reminded of! It is amazing how much stuff we aquire over the years...
08/28/05
Good thoughts and nice take on the subject. The use of wemade it come across as a little preachy. A better technique is to be more direct ie: people have a tendency to- In this way you are expressing what you have observed to be true instead of making an asumption that everybody feels the same way. I have been guilty of the same thing in some of my writing. I enjoyed the direction of the piece and think it is a worthwhile topic. Loved the thought that went into the topic.