The Official Writing Challenge
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“Carry the luggage of goodness in your heart and let your life be free of burden.” SO true! Blessings, Rita
A very thought-provoking piece and one we need to be reminded of! It is amazing how much stuff we aquire over the years...
Good thoughts and nice take on the subject. The use of wemade it come across as a little preachy. A better technique is to be more direct ie: people have a tendency to- In this way you are expressing what you have observed to be true instead of making an asumption that everybody feels the same way. I have been guilty of the same thing in some of my writing. I enjoyed the direction of the piece and think it is a worthwhile topic. Loved the thought that went into the topic.