The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
I really like the great word pictures,morphed,hissed, sulfurous, You set the scene well. I liked the fact that she reads her Bible and prays,
the things Satan cannot prevail against. You have woven a good story.Keep them coming!
10/22/09
Interesting take on the scriptures. Theology seems to me to be just a tiny bit off, but the story telling is fine. I hope you do well and suspect you will.

Let me know privately if you want me to discuss the theology aspect further.
10/27/09
This was well done!

There were a few places that I thought could be polished up for punctuation, formatting, and the like (capitalization of 'Bible', for example), but some of those may be Brit/US differences.

Excellent story-telling.
What an interesting take on this weeks word. Nothing is darker then Satan and his demons. They have no love for anyone. Thanks for such an interesting story. Keep up the good work.
10/29/09
Congratulations on your 3rd place win! Also being a nurse,I sure related to this story and have found myself in similar real life stories.
As your profile states, nurses can be writers by faith!
11/12/09
Wonderful read! And a great example of witnessing, too!