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10/22/09
Good use of the dialect. Very touching story. Well done.
10/22/09
Interesting defintion of the black/white thing. Keep writing.
10/23/09
good story! thanks
God bless you for such a gripping story. How sad that people judge by the color of skin. We are all God's children regardless of skin color and if we love the Lord all are pure and clean on the inside which is what matters most.
10/27/09
The voice, and the mother's lessons, are great!

I was confused by the beginning--these people are already slaves; who are the men in white who are taking them?