The Official Writing Challenge
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Now that's writing with content, keep up the good work!
very powerful!
What a powerful story. It held me attention from beginning to end. Thank you for such a loving story. Keep up the good work
Excellent writing, powerful story.

I'll have to think a bit about the fact that the Shadow Man sometimes kills. Would be interested in hearing his justification for situational ethics.

This would make a great novel, that's for sure!
That was a powerful story Colin. I wish I had had time to write a comment prior to judging as I would have said THIS IS A WINNER.
Amazing story. Would make a great novel. A little concerned about the ethics of killing, however. Keep writing!