The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
Well done poem,some very touching lines.
10/17/09
this is lovely!
I loved this poem. A parents love is so special and watching those little darlings grow does tear ones heart. Thank you.
10/20/09
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was well-written. I think, though, that you got the words a little tangled in one of the lines. You have, "I want to your hold little body forever." I think you meant : I want to hold your little body forever. Still, it was a wonderful poem.