The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
Touching story. A Christian family can have great influence.
10/17/09
oooooh the gun was a surprise. I loved the descriptions of the swimming and such a good idea for the theme "blue"
Thank you for such a gripping story. Love truly conquers all.
10/20/09
This was a great story. I enjoyed reading it. Often we don't realize how much of a difference we can make in the lives of others.
10/20/09
I not only liked it, I loved it! Good job!
10/20/09
Oh, forgot to say I really liked the title also.