The Official Writing Challenge
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A truly interesting honeymoon and a written narrative to back it up. Very creative.
08/16/05
A good story with a clever title :) I enjoyed it very much.
08/20/05
I love castles! Good work involving us with your feelings and smells and all.
08/20/05
I love the message of laying down one's life for the gospel's sake. Using active voice instead of passive would improve this wonderful piece.
08/21/05
I think my previous comment may be totally wrong concerning the 'active - passive'. I'll PM you soon:)