The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing, very compelling story, and I LOVE the open ending. Very smart writing, and something I'd not be surprised in a higher level. Very, very well done.
Very nicely crafted. God can save out of any situation.
This was a well-written article. It's sad that people really do live this life. Thank you for writing us and for reminding us of the help that these people need.
Good writing, I found myself running with her. (In my mind of course):)
Wow,this is great exciting writing. Very realistic and visual. Well Done. Excellent story. Colin
Wow, this is excellent. I had a very clear picture of all that was happening, and I learned about a new (to me) mission as well. Two thumbs up.
Oh. I couldn't breathe as she ran to the church. I hope she made it in time. Excellent writing.
Absolutely fantastic. Definitely one of my favorites this week. The build was very well developed. I almost think you could have eliminated everything after "I could hear Stevan’s footsteps right behind me." and left the reader to invoke the following questions themselves.
Great work, I hope this does well!
Wow, so amazing this entry is based on a real life scenario. You did such a good job of showing the MC's nightmarish life. And bless you for bringing this ministry to our attention.
Wow. Very masterful writing. I was surprised to see this was in the Intermediate level. You had me engaged in the story from beginning to end.
Whew! I bet you have a sequel in mind already. You grabbed me at the onset of this story and my heart was racing along with the MC. Excellent job with this highly commended entry.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended placement...this was a gripping story.