The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an odd one. It left me twisting my thoughts around for the meaning which I'm not sure I found. Nocely written though.
10/10/09
Interesting to contemplate what the world would be like without certain colors.

I wonder if this would have more impact if we were to discover the reason for the loss of red.

A note: there's a class on poetry in the Writing Forum on the message boards. You're welcome to come and check it out! We welcome input from all poets.