The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautifully done. Just enough in each snippet to draw out meaning and feeling. Well done.
10/09/09
Well done; I like the way you traced the color red through all the times of his life.
10/11/09
I enjoyed the journey of phases you walked me through as I got to know Danny year by year. Very good use of the topic in each paragraph. Great job.
10/12/09
I enjoyed reading this article. It was a wonderful way to show us different things in our lives that are red without just giving us a list of red things. I enjoyed following the path of this boy's life from childhood to young adulthood.
10/21/09
Congratulations on your 2nd place win.You did a great job
with the red continuum in the MC's life.