The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Really nice take on the topic...I loved the scrunch lob :)
09/18/09
Interesting, I probably would have put the "Scrunch - Lob" in italics to indicate an action. Other than that the story needed a little more umph to draw the reader in.
09/18/09
Really heartwarming and I like that it came from a father...the draw of the story is the readers identification with the emotions of a parent letting go...very universal.Good job.